Course Profile   Literacy Skills:  Reading and Writing, Grade 11, Open, Catholic

 

Unit 1:  Reading and Writing

Time:  40 hours (15+5 hours added from each of the other units)

 

Activity 1 | Activity 2 | Activity 3 | Activity 4 | Activity 5 | Activity 6

Unit Description

Because the focus of this course is to improve literacy, it is essential that the development and improvement of reading comprehension and writing skills be in the forefront. The first section, two hours long, is diagnostic. It will be necessary to ascertain each student’s level of performance at the beginning of the course in order to tailor the course to meet the needs of the student. The second section, six hours long, will familiarize students with a variety of reading techniques and strategies as well as with the basic conventions of Standard Canadian English. The third section, seven hours long, will deal specifically with writing as a step-by-step process involving brainstorming, writing, conferencing, editing, and publishing. In the five subsequent units of this course, students will read, write, and interpret a variety of paragraphs, personal responses and letters, short stories, dialogues, summaries, bibliographies, short essays, news stories, reports, etc. while improving their skills in spelling, grammar, and punctuation. In addition, students will familiarize themselves with both print and electronic devices designed to assist them with their reading and writing skills.

Strand(s) and Expectations

Ontario Catholic School Graduate Expectations

CGE2a - listen actively and critically to understand and learn in light of gospel values;

CGE2c - present information and ideas clearly and honestly and with sensitivity to others;

CGE2d - write and speak fluently one or both of Canada’s official languages;

CGE2e - use and integrate the Catholic faith tradition, in the critical analysis of the arts, media, technology and information systems to enhance the quality of life;

CGE3b - create, adapt, evaluate new ideas in light of the common good;

CGE4a - demonstrate a confident and positive sense of self and respect for the dignity and welfare of others;

CGE4b - demonstrate flexibility and adaptability;

CGE5a - work effectively as an interdependent team member.

Strand(s):  Reading Skills, Writing Skills

Overall Expectations

REV.01 - demonstrate an understanding of a variety of contemporary texts;

REV.02 - demonstrate an understanding of the elements of a variety of contemporary texts, with a focus on short plays, short stories, novels, poetry, and newspaper and magazine articles and opinion pieces;

REV.04 - use a variety of strategies to understand words encountered in texts;

WRV.01 - investigate information and ideas for written work, using a variety of print and electronic sources;

WRV.02 - demonstrate an understanding of the forms of writing appropriate for specific purposes and audiences, with an emphasis on using the forms to communicate information clearly and accurately;

WRV.03 - organize information, ideas, and supporting details in written work;

WRV.04 - revise drafts of written work, collaboratively and independently, with an emphasis on improving content, clarity, and coherence;

WRV.05 - edit, proofread, and publish written work, using correctly – grammar, spelling, and punctuation according to the conventions of standard Canadian English, as specified for this course, with the support of print and electronic resources where appropriate.

Specific Expectations

RE1.01 - read a variety of self-selected and teacher-assigned contemporary texts for different purposes, with an emphasis on locating important information, identifying main ideas and supporting details, extending personal knowledge and responding imaginatively (e.g., read a short story as a model for writing; read a magazine article on a topic of personal interest and report on the main ideas and details to a small group);

RE1.02 - use and assess strategies before, during, and after reading to understand a variety of contemporary texts, with an emphasis on setting a purpose for reading. Making predictions about content, skimming and scanning, using prior knowledge to understand text, predicting and confirming while reading, discussing main ideas and supporting details, rereading section, and summarizing key points (e.g., skim texts to locate specific ideas; discuss the effectiveness of a reading strategy modelled by the teacher; assess the appropriateness of a reading strategy used during a guided reading session; compare reading strategies used by various students to read the same passage; identify their strengths and weaknesses in reading and set goals for improvement);

RE1.03 - use knowledge of the organization of texts to locate relevant information (e.g., create chapter titles to identify plot details in a novel; use headings, table of contents, and the index to find specific information in a text; refer to illustrations and diagrams to clarify information; explain the role of the introduction, body, and conclusion of a short essay in communicating the main idea; use knowledge of the organizational pattern of a text, such as comparison and contrast or cause and effect, to locate answers to questions about the text);

RE1.04 - compare their own interpretations of texts with those of others (e.g., record responses to self-selected materials and share them with others in a small group; chart and compare various responses to the actions of a character in a novel; discuss different interpretations of the same text and suggest possible reasons for the differences; compare their own preferences for authors, genres, and topics with those of peers; explain how personal values and perspectives influence responses to and interpretations of texts);

RE2.05 - use knowledge of the elements of newspaper and magazine articles and opinion pieces, with an emphasis on headlines, leads, the Five W’s (who, what, where, when, and why?), titles, subtitles, and accompanying photographs, to understand and interpret these texts;

RE4.01 - preview vocabulary before reading (e.g., skim and scan texts to identify unfamiliar words and look them up in a dictionary or glossary);

RE4.02 - use word-identification strategies while reading (e.g., sound out unfamiliar words; scan texts for key words; read ahead in the passage to find or deduce the meaning of an unfamiliar word or phrase; use root words, prefixes, and suffixes to determine the meaning of specialized vocabulary);

RE4.03 - use context to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words (e.g., use the surrounding information and vocabulary in a sentence or paragraph to deduce or infer the meaning of abstract or specialized words; use accompanying illustrations, diagrams, and charts to determine the meaning of unfamiliar words and phrases in a textbook);

RE4.04 - use print and electronic dictionaries, thesauri, and reference texts to clarify the meaning and pronunciation of antonyms, synonyms, homophones, homonyms, specialized language, and commonly confused words;

WR1.01 - describe and use strategies to generate ideas and explore topics for writing (e.g., brainstorm approaches to a topic; use graphic organizers to connect and structure ideas; use charts and graphs as sources of information; identify key words to narrow a topic);

WR1.02 - make research plans based on information needs (e.g., identify possible sources of information on specific writing topics; set timelines to plan, research, draft, revise, and complete short research projects);

WR1.03 - locate and record information from a variety of print and electronic sources (e.g., use an electronic catalogue in the library or an Internet search engine to locate information from textbooks, encyclopedias, magazines, CD-ROMs, and websites; use highlighting, note making, paraphrasing, and summarizing to gather and record relevant information);

WR1.04 - assess information to determine its relevance, sufficiency, and accuracy (e.g., classify information by topic and subtopics; assess the accuracy of information by comparing it with information from another source);

WR2.01 - demonstrate an understanding of form in written work, with an emphasis on narratives, summaries, reports, letters, and short essays (e.g., write frequently on self-selected and teacher-assigned literary and general-interest topics in a variety of forms);

WR2.02 - describe the form, purpose, and intended audience for each piece of writing;

WR2.03 - use the appropriate person and level of language for a specific form, purpose, and audience (e.g., use formal language in a short essay describing the theme of a novel studied; use the impersonal third person consistently in the summary of a report; use the first person in a friendly letter);

WR3.01 - construct complete sentences to present information and ideas, using a variety of sentence types (e.g., compose a variety of single, compound, and complex sentences on a topic; alter the word order in sentences for emphasis and variety);

WR3.02 - organize sentences about a topic into coherent and unified paragraphs (e.g., use a topic sentence to state the main idea of a paragraph; use relevant details to develop the main idea; use a specific pattern, such as logical, chronological, or climactic order, to organize information in a paragraph);

WR3.03 - organize paragraphs into coherent and unified narratives, reports, letters, and short essays (e.g., maintain a consistent point of view in a narrative; use transition words to link paragraphs in a letter; state the controlling idea in the opening paragraph of a short essay);

WR4.01 - revise drafts to strengthen the content (e.g., use feedback from a partner to identify incomplete ideas or lack of details; read passages aloud to identify unnecessary or incorrectly placed information);

WR4.02 - revise the organization of drafts to improve clarity of thought and expression (e.g., use a highlighter to track the logical development of ideas; use a word-processing program to reorder sentences, paragraphs, or sections of a draft; combine simple sentences to show a clear relationship between ideas);

WR4.03 - revise drafts to improve coherence (e.g., signal transitions with appropriate transition words and phrases; check for consistency between the topic sentence and the concluding statement);

WR4.04 - revise drafts to ensure consistent use of the appropriate person and level of language to suit the form, purpose, and audience (e.g., maintain consistent use of the impersonal third person in the summary of a report; check the use of the first person in a friendly letter; review the use of formal language in a short essay describing the theme of a novel studied);

WR4.05 - use print and electronic dictionaries, thesauri, and reference texts to select precise and appropriate vocabulary and find alternative phrasings for awkward constructions (e.g., select and use specialized vocabulary to clarify technical information and complex concepts);

WR5.01 - incorporate information from research into written work by using quotation marks and consistent documentation;

WR5.02 - describe and use strategies to edit, proofread, and correct written work (e.g., use peer feedback to identify errors in sentence structure and grammar; use spell checkers to flag possible spelling errors; replace incorrectly used homophones and homonyms);

WR5.03 - identify and use appropriate and effective techniques and formats to publish written work (e.g., word-process the final copy of a short story; edit and format a class anthology of effective student writing; add diagrams and charts to a report for a bulletin-board display);

WR5.04 - edit and proofread written work, identifying and correcting errors according to the requirements of grammar, usage, spelling, and punctuation listed below:

- Grammar and Usage: Identify the rules of subject-verb and pronoun agreement and apply them correctly;

- Grammar and Usage: Identify and use correctly the principal parts of irregular verbs;

- Spelling: Identify and apply a wide variety of spelling patterns, rules, and strategies to recognize and correct spelling errors (e.g., use knowledge of word patterns, word families, root words, prefixes, suffixes, and syllabication to check spelling; use a variety of spelling references, such as dictionaries and spell checkers, to flag possible errors);

- Spelling: Spell correctly specialized vocabulary, unfamiliar words, and words that deviate from regular spelling patterns (e.g., check a dictionary for the correct spelling of abbreviations and technical terms);

- Punctuation: Identify the use of effective punctuation when reading and use punctuation correctly when writing.

Activity Titles (Time + Sequence)

Activity 1

Diagnostic Assessment

100 minutes

Activity 2

Language Usage, Grammar, and Punctuation

220 minutes

Activity 3

Improving Reading Skills, Developing Reading Strategies

120 minutes

Activity 4

Using Words Effectively, Vocabulary Development

120 minutes

Activity 5

Using Research Skills: Annotated Bibliography

100 minutes

Activity 6

The Writing Process: A Five-Step Plan

240 minutes

Unit Planning Notes

·         As well as the 15 hours set aside for this unit, students will have an additional 25 hours, five in each subsequent unit of study, in which to reinforce and refine the skills covered here. Thus this unit is diagnostic and formative in nature. Summative evaluation will take place in the context of subsequent units.

·         Depending on the ability level of the students in the class, the teacher may choose to spend more time on certain aspects of the unit rather than on others. Wherever possible, the teacher should use reading selections from other courses, the workplace, and the community to enhance the unit.

·         There exists a number of prepared templates, rubrics and checklists that teachers may use as they are or adapt to their use, such as those developed in the Performance Assessment Manual developed by the EOCCC, and Coping With the New Curriculum, from O.S.S.T.F. In addition, a number of samples have been included in this unit. While it is preferable that students be consulted in the preparation of templates and rubrics for summative evaluations, the teacher may use prepared materials as long as the students are provided with them and the criteria are discussed prior to the assignment and its evaluation.

·         Prepare samples of the Personal Dictionary and the Portfolio of Written Work to be kept by each student in the class. The Personal Dictionary should have five sections: Language Usage Rules, Writing as a Process, Technical Terminology and Definitions, New Vocabulary and Miscellaneous Information. The Portfolio of Written Work will be used throughout the course as a forum for student opinions, ideas, and thoughts on specific topics provided by the teacher. Students will divide the journal into two sections: Assigned Responses and Personal Responses.

·         The following details should be arranged prior to the start of the unit:

·         Speak to the teacher-librarian about the availability of time in the Library/Resource Centre to use both print and electronic research materials as well as use the computers for word processing.

·         Schedule time in the Computer Lab to give the students the opportunity to explore the Internet and the various search engines and websites available, and to become familiar with the more popular word processing and publishing programs.

·         Ensure that all students have had time to become familiar with and understand the school board’s protocol for the use of the Internet and the Computer Labs prior to the first scheduled day in the lab.

·         Arrange for a computer technician or teacher to be on hand the first time students use the machines to ensure that they have the necessary help in place.

·         Confer with the public librarian in the community to find out about hours of operation and student access to those facilities. While some communities may have Internet Cafes and the like, students should be informed about the cost of using computers in such locations.

·         Collect a variety of self-help spelling aids for the class such as dictionaries, spelling lists, electronic and hand-held spell checking devices.

·         Have a number of grammar textbooks, CD-ROMs and other materials on hand from which to select appropriate activities.

·         Find samples of the different types of writing: opinion/persuasion, narrative, explanatory/instructive, compare/contrast, descriptive, cause/effect, factual reports, short essays, and letters that will be examined in the latter part of the unit and that students can model to practise each type of writing studied.

·         Gather examples of workplace related writing samples so that students have the opportunity to connect the need to write properly, using correct spelling, punctuation and grammar with the world of work.

·         It is essential that students understand the need to use Gospel values and ethics, (generosity, kindness, justice, equality, understanding, joy, hope and forgiveness) in the way they respond to their peers. For the writing process to be successful, students must feel comfortable having their peers assess their work. This is only possible if the students treat one another with the same care and consideration with which they would like to be treated. A review of gospel values such as patience, kindness, faithfulness, acceptance, self-control, humility, and respect, and positive feedback will be in order at the start of the writing process activity.

·         As always, the teacher should refer to the students’ IEPs to ensure that suitable accommodations and/or modifications are made to enhance the learning experience for the students. The needs of ESL and ELD students should also be considered and addressed by the teacher. Understanding that the needs of students may vary, the teacher should have remedial work and enrichment work available as needed for those students who experience more difficulty than others in grasping an idea or principle of reading or writing, or who are prepared to move ahead before their classmates.

Prior Knowledge Required

Students will:

·         have had previous experience with English language courses;

·         have a basic understanding of the basic rules of spelling;

·         have a basic knowledge of reading strategies and methods of decoding unfamiliar words, which they have used in the past;

·         have had experience reading a variety of materials both in and out of school;

·         understand that English is an evolving language and changes regularly;

·         be aware that regional/national differences occur in the way people speak and write the English language;

·         have some knowledge and basic experience using computers in order to access word processing software;

·         be aware of the school board protocol for use of the Internet, and the school regulations concerning use of the Computer Lab;

·         be able to write simple sentences;

·         know the difference between a sentence and a phrase;

·         respect the rights and opinions of others in light of the gospel values listed above;

·         be aware of the need for good communication skills in the workplace.

Teaching/Learning Strategies

·         Teacher-led Socratic lessons

·         Spelling lists to assist with spelling

·         Simplified grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure rules sheets for future reference

·         Worksheets to reinforce concepts of spelling, grammar, punctuation and word usage

·         Note taking and note making

·         Teacher-modelled reading of a variety of genres.

·         Oral and silent reading using a variety of reading decoding techniques

·         Outlining exercises for reading comprehension and effective note making

·         Using diagrams/charts to improve comprehension in reading and writing

·         Brainstorming

·         Writing/editing/revising as a process

·         Provided models of sample letters and paragraphs to be written

·         Provided peer/self editing checklists for the writing process

·         Student-teacher conferencing to ensure that individual needs are being met, and that material is understood

·         Peer conferencing

·         Class discussions

·         Collaborative learning

·         Using technological aids – the Internet, computer software, etc.

Assessment and Evaluation

Diagnostic Assessment

·         Completed diagnostic reading and writing assessment material (see Appendices 1.1 to 1.4)

Formative Assessment

·         A variety of reinforcement and/or remedial activities to ensure students master the basic conventions of language

·         Informal observation of students as they work on different aspects of the unit

·         Peer/self editing checklists for writing assignments

·         Portfolio of Written Work Rubric completed at the end of each unit

·         Personal Dictionary Rubric completed at the end of each unit

Accommodations

·         Preferential/strategic seating

·         Peer tutor to help with reading/writing and the first stage of assignments

·         Assistance from Special Education as needed

·         Enlarged print for worksheets and tests, all of which should be typed

·         Use of mnemonics to remember spelling rules, etc. taught and encouraged

·         Use of audio equipment to assist with reading comprehension

·         Use of dual language dictionaries

·         Alternative methods of note making and note taking such as a scribe, use of diagrams, or point form

·         Use of index cards rather than notebooks, if the student prefers

·         New information taught using concrete examples relevant to the students

·         Visual aids to assist with the various steps of the writing process

·         Flexible timelines/assignment lengths

·         Additional access to computers and software provided

Resources

Prepared diagnostic reading and writing activities, such as:

Cornfield, R.J., Kathleen Coyle, Beverley Durrant, Karl McCutcheon, John Pollard, and William Stratton. Making the Grade: Evaluating Student Progress. Scarborough: Prentice-Hall, 1987.

La Pray, Margaret H. On The Spot Reading Diagnosis File. New York: The Center for Applied Research in Education, Inc., 1978.

Midwood, Dale, et al. Assess for Success: Assessment, Evaluation, and Reporting for Successful Learning. Toronto: OSSTF Educational Services, 1993.

Ontario Assessment Instrument Pool. Reading Passages for Assessing Language Arts, Books I, II, III. Toronto: Ministry of Education, 1990.

Current assessment materials will be available from the Special Education Department

Manuals on language skills and writing such as:

Archer, Lynn, Cathy Costello, and Debbie Harvey. Reading and Writing for Success. Canada: Harcourt-Brace, 1999.

Artman, John. Slanguage Activities and Ideas on the History and Nature of Language. New York, Crest Litho, Inc., 1980.

Bunnell, Jean. 400 Words That Work: A Lifeskills Vocabulary Program. Maine: J. Weston Walsh, Publisher, 1992.

Canadian Writer’s Companion. Toronto, Prentice Hall Canada, Inc., 1997.

Coping With the New Curriculum. Practical Strategies for Implementing the New Curriculum. Toronto: Ontario Secondary School Teachers’ Federation, 1999.

Cramer, Ronald L. Building Concrete Writing Skills. Michigan: The Instructor Publications, Inc., 1982.

Elliott, Rebecca. Painless Grammar. New York: Barron’s Educational Services, Inc., 1997.

George, Jerry. Good Grief! Good Grammar! A Basic (and Short) Guide to Standard English. Markham: Pembroke Publishing, 1994.

Grizzard, Mabel Youree. Language Exercises Revised (9 workbooks). Texas: Stech-Vaughn Company, 1984.

Hopper, Vincent F., Cedric Gale, Ronald C. Foote, and Benjamin W. Griffith. Essentials of English. New York: Barron’s Educational Series, Inc., 1990.

Language Arts Survival Guide. Toronto, Prentice Hall Canada, Inc., 1997.

McFarlane, J.A. (Sandy), and Warren Clements. Style Book 1996: A Guide to Language and Usage. Toronto: Penguin Books, 1996.

Pacemaker’s Passage to Basic English. Scarborough: Globe Fearon (Prentice Hall Ginn), 1999.

Read, Hugh D. Look it Up an Alphabetical Reference for Writers. Scarborough: Prentice-Hall Canada, Inc., 1992.

Schramfer, Betty. Basic English Grammar. New Jersey: Prentice Hall Regents, 1996.

Shapiro, Nathaniel. Reading Efficiency. Scholastic Inc., 1980.

Steere, Amey, Caroline Z. Peck, and Linda Kahn. Solving Language Difficulties: Remedial Routines. Massachusetts: Educators Publishing Service, Inc., 1971.

Withington, Janice J. Genres of Literature. Thematic Study Guides and Bibliographies. California, Good Apple, a Division of Frank Schaffer Publications, 1996.

Dictionaries and thesauri

CD-ROMs

Internet Websites

http://www.grammarlady.com/

http://www.grammarnow.com/

http://www.dailygrammar.com/

http://andromeda.rutgers.edu/~jlynch/writing

http://www.grammarbook.com/

http://webster.commnet.edu/hp/pages/darling/grammar.htm

http://www.edunet.com/english/grammar

http://www.luther.bc.ca/~dave7cnv/cdnspelling/cndspelling.html

http://www.web.net/cornerstone/cndeng.htm

http://library.utoronto.ca/www/writing/books6.html

http://www.kenevacorp.mb.ca.service.htm#Writing

Computer software

Textbooks and other cross-curricular material

Pamphlets and brochures from a variety of sources such as Guidance, Career Exploration, non-profit organizations, travel agencies, church bulletins, Sunday Missals, and devotional materials

A variety of application forms and leases

Product and medicine labels

Canadian newspapers and magazines

Holy Bible. The New Revised Standard Version, Catholic Edition. Nashville: The Catholic Bible Press, a division of Thomas Nelson, Inc., 1993.

Novels, short stories, poems, and articles with Canadian content

Greeting cards for all occasions

 

Activity 1:  Diagnostic Assessment

Time:  100 minutes

Description

The purpose of this activity is to help the learner by assisting teachers in finding the best way to tailor the course to meet the needs of individual students. In this activity, students will complete a number of diagnostic reading assessments and writing activities designed to help the teacher assess individual abilities and plan suitable instruction.

Strand(s) and Expectations

Ontario Catholic School Graduate Expectations:  2a, 2d, 2e, 4b.

Strand(s):  Reading Skills, Writing Skills

Overall Expectations:  REV.01, REV.04, WRV.02, WRV.03, WRV.05.

Specific Expectations:  RE1.03, RE4.02, WR2.01, WR3.01, WR3.02, WR5.04.

Planning Notes

·         There are a number of commercially produced reading and writing assessment tools available that can be adapted for use by the classroom teacher. The Special Education staff should be consulted for the best resources obtainable in the school.

·         The teacher should familiarize himself/herself with remedial materials on-hand at the school that can be used to design the various question sheets for this activity. These may be found in both the Special Education and the English Departments. As well, a number of Internet websites can be useful for finding information on grammar, punctuation, spelling and writing skills.

·         If the results of the Grade 10 Test of Reading and Writing completed by the current class of students are available, the teacher may use them to compare the present level of performance with the performance on the test.

·         The information obtained in this activity is to be used by the teacher to adapt the remaining content of this unit to meet the needs of the students in the class. Students who are not successful in this activity will require additional remediation and assistance from the teacher, a peer tutor, or the Special Education Department.

·         The Special Education Department should be consulted prior to the activity in order to discuss possible test anxiety on the part of identified students or students who may have failed the Grade 10 Test of Reading and Writing. Although this activity is not technically a test situation, some students may be more at ease in an alternate location.

·         A number of commercially prepared rubrics are available to the teacher for assessing writing activities. The teacher may wish to use one of them or one that has been previously developed by colleagues in the English department of his/her school. Specific samples have been provided in the appendices of this course profile. If the teacher wishes, he/she may develop a rubric specific to an activity. Regardless of which rubric is used, these should be shared with the students prior to any writing assignments. It is important to ascertain that all students understand exactly what will be assessed and how this will be done.

·         For the sake of consistency, the teacher should use the same rubric to evaluate similar work. That way, students will know what is asked of them and be able to see the progress they make in particular areas. This will help them set personal goals/targets for self-improvement.

·         The teacher may invite students to bring in previously completed writing samples that they believe best exemplify their writing abilities. These samples may come from a previous course.

·         Where appropriate the teacher should refer to the students’ IEPs to make the necessary accommodations and/or modifications. In some cases, IEPs will have current level of performance indicators that the teacher may use to enhance his/her diagnostic activities. The teacher should also be aware of any accommodations that may be required by ESL, ELD, or other students in the class who have not yet had an IEP prepared.

Prior Knowledge Required

Students will:

·         have had previous experience in English language courses;

·         be able to read simple selections for content and understanding;

·         be able to write simple sentences;

·         know the difference between a sentence and a phrase;

·         be familiar with the basic format used in letter writing.

Teaching/Learning Strategies

·         Students will complete this activity over a two-day period; the first day’s work will deal with reading and comprehension, the second will involve grammar, punctuation, vocabulary and writing skills.

·         The teacher will inform students that these assignments are for diagnostic purposes only.

·         On the first day, the teacher will hand out selected reading passages, and comprehension questions. Students will read the short paragraphs, and answer the questions. See Appendix 1.1 for a sample reading passage and questions. Please note: this sample evaluates comprehension and decoding in context; it does not measure accurately a student’s ability to reason or make inferences.

·         The teacher should select passages from other course textbooks to supplement reading passages and provide cross-curricular learning opportunities. Students should be asked to summarize a selection of text to demonstrate comprehension and the purpose of what they read in relation to the topic.

·         On the second day, the teacher will ask students to give reasons why it is important to be able to communicate clearly and accurately. For example, ask the students to discuss what would happen if people could spell words any way they wanted to, or if they could invent words for things without any sort of limitations. Ask students to explain what would happen on a work site if people used different words to describe the same objects. Have students discuss the confusion that occurs if someone answers a question using highly technical vocabulary.

·         After the discussion, the teacher will assign the language usage/writing portion of the activity. The teacher may choose to give a spelling quiz as part of this activity, selecting words from the previous day’s reading passages as well as frequently misspelled words. Words should always be presented in context. After the spelling quiz, students will complete language usage and writing activities. See Appendix 1.2 for a sample test.

·         The language usage portion of the activity should be designed to identify student performance in sentence structure, sentence combining, punctuation, capitalization, and conjugation of regular and irregular verbs, word usage, and comprehension using a Cloze procedure passage.

·         The writing skills section should offer students the opportunity to demonstrate their skills in letter writing and paragraph production, but to be effective, the writing should have a real-life context. For example, students could write a letter to a friend describing their new classes, a letter to the principal concerning a school rule, a letter to a future employer, etc. Samples of writing, previously completed by the student may be used to supplement this portion of the diagnostic activity.

·         The writing activity should include opportunities for students to demonstrate sentence construction and variety, grammar, spelling, capitalization, word usage, style, and to produce at least two different types of writing.

·         Students are to use the Personal section of the writing in their Portfolios of Written Work to write out their expectations for the course, outline what they believe they must do to be successful in it, and set personal goals to help them achieve this success.

Assessment/Evaluation Techniques

Diagnostic Assessment

·         Informal teacher observation of student behaviour during the assessments (see Appendix 1.16)

·         Reading assessment evaluation grids provided with commercially prepared materials or developed by the teacher

·         Reading comprehension questions

·         Paragraph writing assessed by Paragraph Rubric (see Appendix 1.3)

·         Letter writing assessed by Letter Rubric (see Appendix 1.4)

Accommodations

·         More time, if needed

·         Activities completed in an alternate location

·         Larger print, if required

·         Chunking of activity instructions to minimize anxiety

·         Use of a scribe if necessary

·         Access to dual language dictionaries

Resources

Prepared diagnostic materials such as:

Cornfield, R.J., Kathleen Coyle, Beverley Durrant, Karl McCutcheon, John Pollard, and William Stratton. Making the Grade: Evaluating Student Progress. Scarborough: Prentice-Hall, 1987.

La Pray, Margaret H. On The Spot Reading Diagnosis File. New York: The Center for Applied Research in Education, Inc., 1978.

Midwood, Dale, et al. Assess for Success: Assessment, Evaluation, and Reporting for Successful Learning. Toronto: OSSTF Educational Services, 1993.

Ontario Assessment Instrument Pool. Reading Passages for Assessing Language Arts, Books I, II, III. Toronto: Ministry of Education, 1990.

Current materials will be available from the Special Education Department

Reading selections from other subject areas

Grammar, punctuation and word usage activity sheets

Grade 10 Test of Reading and Writing

Magazines and newspapers

Reading materials such as novels, short story anthologies, comic books, paper-and-pencil puzzles such as eye twisters and word search puzzles for students who complete the assessments before the others

 

Activity 2:  Language Usage, Grammar, and Punctuation

Time:  220 minutes

Description

This activity is designed to teach the basic conventions of Standard Canadian English, specifically the use of grammar and punctuation rules. This activity is formative and subsequent activities and units will build on the skills presented in this activity. Students will examine, discuss and practise the various rules of grammar and punctuation.

Strand(s) and Expectations

Ontario Catholic School Graduate Expectations:  2a, 2d, 3b, 4a, 4b, 5a.

Strand(s):  Reading and Writing

Overall Expectations:  REV.01, WRV.03, WRV.04, WRV.05.

Specific Expectations:  RE1.03, WR3.01, WR4.02, WR4.05, WR5.02, WR5.04.

Planning Notes

·         The amount of time spent on each aspect of this activity should be determined by the strengths and weaknesses identified in the diagnostic activities.

·         The teacher is reminded that the material covered in this unit will not be mastered in a matter of hours. The purpose of this activity is to introduce concepts that will be reinforced throughout the course. While some students may be familiar with some of the material covered, the teacher should use the opportunity to encourage those students to both build on existing skills, and assist those classmates for whom the information is new.

·         The teacher should be familiar with the resource materials available in the school in order to create the necessary worksheets and fact sheets.

·         Many of the concepts covered in the unit will require Socratic instruction in order for the rules to be understood by the students. However, the teacher should prepare lesson plans that address visual, auditory, and kinesthetic (hands-on) learning preferences while allowing for collaborative learning opportunities and student involvement whenever possible (visual learners need to see the lesson, auditory learners need to hear/speak the lesson, kinesthetic learners need to manipulate the lesson).

·         The teacher prepares fact sheets to be given to the students for use as reference guides throughout the course. Suggestions for these sheets include:

·         Rules of Punctuation and Rules of Capitalization

·         Spelling Patterns and Rules

·         Conjugation of Irregular Verbs

·         Samples of each of the Four Basic Sentence Types

·         Rules and Common Errors in Sentencing

·         Definitions of various Grammar Terms

·         The Parts of Speech such as noun, adjective, adverb, etc.

·         The Essential Parts of a Sentence – subject, predicate (verb), modifiers, etc.

·         As an alternative to fact sheets, the teacher may use an overhead projector and transparencies to present new material, or use computer projection if the hardware is available. Care should be taken that all projections are clear and easily visible by all students.

·         The teacher prepares a number of worksheets to reinforce each grammar/punctuation concept being taught or reviewed. Some students will require more reinforcement than others to grasp a concept. Enrichment/alternative assignments should be available for those who master the concept quickly.

·         As always, the teacher consults the students’ IEPs to ensure that the necessary accommodations and/or modifications are made.

Prior Knowledge Required

Students will:

·         be able to write a simple sentence;

·         understand basic grammar terms such as noun, and verb;

·         have experience working in pairs and small groups;

·         understand the meaning of punctuation terms such as comma, period, and question mark;

·         know the difference between a statement and a question.

Teaching/Learning Strategies

The teacher will:

·         review expected student behaviour during small group activities (see Appendix 1.12).

·         explain to the students that they will be keeping a Personal Dictionary and a Portfolio of Written Work throughout this course. These items will be assessed on a regular basis throughout the course (see Appendices 1.17, 1.18). Show students previously prepared sample of a Personal Dictionary and a Portfolio of Written Work. All final drafts of written work are to be kept in the Portfolios of Written Work.

·         present a number of lessons dealing with a variety of grammar concepts stressing those areas that show weakness according to the diagnostic assessments.

·         use a variety of teaching methods to present information for each component of the lessons and to address different learning styles (oral, visual, hands-on activities, opportunities to share ideas, etc.).

·         refer to the discussion at the beginning of the unit on the need for clear communication. Give students a copy of a reading selection from which all punctuation and capitalization has been removed (see Appendix 1.5). In pairs, students will read, capitalize, and punctuate the selection. Students will share their suggestions with the class and the teacher will punctuate the paragraph according to their suggestions (an overhead works best here). Students will then compare their punctuated selections with the correctly punctuated original. Selections may include paragraphs from short stories, magazine articles, the Bible, or prayers. The teacher should provide the rules of capitalization and punctuation to students to keep in their personal dictionaries for future reference.

·         have students discuss how errors in punctuation may cause serious problems in the community and in the workplace, and how punctuation errors can lead to a breakdown in communication and comprehension.

·         discuss the difference between present, past, and future to introduce verb tenses. The distinction between past and past perfect must be made clearly using concrete examples relevant to the students. The teacher will give students a list of regular verbs and have them give the present, past, and future form for each verb. This may be done in small groups or as a full class. Once the students understand the concept, a list of irregular verbs will be given (see Appendix 1.6). This list will be kept in the Personal Dictionary as a reference document to be used throughout the course in writing assignments. The lesson may end with students being asked to rewrite a variety of sentences in different tenses.

·         discuss the difference between a sentence and a fragment. Students should understand that a sentence is a complete thought. Working in small groups, students can categorize sentences from a list as complete sentences or fragments.

·         must stress that a verb is necessary for a group of words to be considered a sentence just as an employer is necessary for there to be a workplace, a priest for the celebration of the Eucharist, fuel for a car to travel, or light for photosynthesis. A list of simple definitions of grammar terms will be given to the students to be placed in their personal dictionaries.

·         put examples of several short simple sentences on the board. Sentences should be on a topic of interest to students or possibly related to the workplace, and be able to be combined into compound and then complex sentences. See Question 8 on sample grammar review, Appendix 1.2 for an example. With the help of the students, the teacher will use the sample simple sentences to combine them into more effective sentence patterns. Following this activity, the teachers should give students a template of the different types of sentences and the way each one is formed. To complete the lesson, students work in pairs to identify different types of sentences. Answers will be noted at the end of each sample sentence. Sentences should be taken from a variety of sources including textbooks from other courses, newspaper and magazine articles, short stories, etc. As a class, correct the activity, making sure that all students understand why each sentence is the type that it is.

·         assign worksheets on sentence combining to strengthen the concepts of sentence variety covered in this activity.

·         in their Portfolios of Written Work, students will comment on the need to learn the basic conventions of language and how knowing and using them can improve their employability.

Assessment/Evaluation Techniques

Formative Assessment

·         Informal teacher observation of students participating in all aspects of the learning (see sample Student Observation Sheet, Appendix 1.16)

·         Completed activity sheets demonstrating that content has been understood

·         Co-operative learning activities for improving inter-personal skills and problem solving abilities

·         Personal Dictionary entries

·         Portfolio of Written Work entries

Accommodations

·         Preferential/strategic seating

·         Peer tutor or assistance from Special Education staff

·         Enlarged print

·         Dual language dictionaries

·         Reduced number of questions/activities and alternate assignments

·         Chunking of information

·         Hard copies of material taught using overheads and computers

·         Flexible timeline to complete activities

Resources

A selection of paragraphs and sentences from textbooks, magazines, newspapers, etc.

Sentence combining activities

Grammar textbooks and workbooks such as:

Archer, Lynn, Cathy Costello, and Debbie Harvey. Reading and Writing for Success. Canada: Harcourt-Brace, 1999.

Cramer, Ronald L. Building Concrete Writing Skills. Michigan: The Instructor Publications, Inc., 1982.

Elliott, Rebecca. Painless Grammar. New York: Barron’s Educational Services, Inc., 1997.

George, Jerry. Good Grief! Good Grammar! A Basic (and Short) Guide to Standard English. Markham: Pembroke Publishing, 1994.

Grizzard, Mabel Youree. Language Exercises revised (9 workbooks). Texas: Stech-Vaughn Company, 1984.

Hopper, Vincent F., Cedric Gale, Ronald C. Foote, and Benjamin W. Griffith. Essentials of English. New York: Barron’s Educational Series, Inc., 1990.

McFarlane, J.A. (Sandy) and Warren Clements. Style Book 1996: A Guide to Language and Usage. Toronto: Penguin Books, 1996.

Pacemaker’s Passage to Basic English. Scarborough: Globe Fearon (Prentice Hall Ginn), 1999.

Schramfer, Betty. Basic English Grammar. New Jersey: Prentice Hall Regents, 1996.

Shapiro, Nathaniel. Reading Efficiency. Scholastic Inc., 1980.

Steere, Amey, Caroline Z. Peck, Linda Kahn. Solving Language Difficulties: Remedial Routines. Massachusetts: Educators Publishing Service, Inc., 1971.

Websites

http://www.grammarlady.com/

http://www.grammarnow.com/

http://www.dailygrammar.com/

http://andromeda.rutgers.edu/~jlynch/writing

http://www.grammarbook.com/

http://webster.commnet.edu/hp/pages/darling/grammar.htm

http://www.edunet.com/english/grammar

http://www.luther.bc.ca/~dave7cnv/cdnspelling/cndspelling.html

http://www.web.net/cornerstone/cndeng.htm

http://library.utoronto.ca/www/writing/books6.html

http://www.kenevacorp.mb.ca.service.htm#Writing

Dictionaries and thesauri

Writing guides for sentence structure and types such as: Writing Yellow Pages for Students and Teachers. Tennessee: Incentive Publications Inc.

Remedial material for additional activities

 

Activity 3:  Improving Reading Skills, Developing Reading Strategies

Time:  120 minutes

Description

The ability to read, understand and use information is critical to succeed in secondary school, the community, and in the workplace. In this activity, students will review previously acquired methods and be introduced to other reading strategies and techniques used to improve comprehension and reading ability. This activity is formative in nature and students will have the opportunity to improve the skills introduced here during the rest of the course as well as in their other classes and daily lives.

Strand(s) and Expectations

Ontario Catholic School Graduate Expectations:  2a, 2c, 2d, 3b, 4a, 4b, 5a.

Strand(s):  Reading Skills, Writing Skills

Overall Expectations:  REV.01, REV.04, WRV.01.

Specific Expectations:  RE1.01, RE1.02, RE1.03, RE1.04, RE4.02, RE4.04, WR1.01, WR1.02, WR1.03.

Planning Notes

·         The teacher collects a variety of print material for reading and evaluation (e.g., selections from the Holy Bible, and other works of literature, greeting cards, application forms, newspaper articles, pamphlets, textbooks from other courses, definitions, product labels, medicine labels, and first aid instructions).

·         The teacher should review the more common methods of reading and be familiar with their use (e.g., skimming, scanning, reading for specific information, reading for enjoyment, speed-reading, etc.).

·         The teacher familiarizes himself/herself with a variety of reading strategies and techniques which include:

·         setting the mood to read/study

·         identify the purpose for reading

·         reading to understand by marking or highlighting difficult passages

·         chunking the information to be read

·         decoding unfamiliar words by using phonics, context clues, prefixes, suffixes, and root words

·         recalling the material without referring to the text

·         digesting the material by recalling information, expanding on its meaning and storing it for future reference

·         predicting the outcome of a situation

·         confirming the predictions and adjusting accordingly

·         outlining key points in the text, especially useful in recalling factual information (see Appendix 1.7)

·         expanding and increasing information by self-questioning

·         reviewing and correcting errors in order to self-teach and learn from the activity

·         A number of excellent resource books exist for teaching reading skills. The teacher should consult the Special Education or English Departments for suitable materials.

·         The teacher reviews the method of improving reading comprehension through the use of mnemonics such as acoustic (sounds), symbolic (drawings to remember words) and mimetic reconstructions (picturing something in your mind to remember a fact, e.g., thinking of the Holy Trinity as a shamrock; three leaves, but only one plant).

·         The teacher prepares a resource sheet of the most common prefixes, suffixes, and root words for students to add to their dictionaries for use throughout the course.

·         The teacher reviews decoding skills such as using phonics to sound out unfamiliar words, breaking long words into syllables, looking for root words, looking for context clues, using dictionaries and thesauri, etc.

Prior Knowledge Required

Students will:

·         be able to read simple passages;

·         know the sounds possible in Standard Canadian English from each letter of the alphabet;

·         have developed personal coping strategies and techniques to deal with unfamiliar words;

·         understand that words may be pronounced in different ways and still be correct;

·         be familiar with the use of both print and electronic dictionaries and thesauri.

Teaching and Learning Strategies

The teacher will:

·         put a number of English words used in other English speaking countries on the board. These words may be unfamiliar to the students or used differently in Canada (e.g., bonnet – a hat here, the hood of a car in Britain; a billy – a club police officers use here, a tea pot in Australia; or grits in the United States is porridge here). Ask students to give other examples of English words they use that may have different meanings to their parents, or others.

·         explain how comprehension can sometimes be affected by regional differences. Have students brainstorm examples of regional and colloquial English words.

·         discuss the various decoding strategies that people use to understand new words and ask the students to volunteer the methods they use.

·         have students share ideas and opinions on the effectiveness of the various strategies and techniques that can be used to decode words and give concrete examples of each.

·         explain how outlining and self-questioning can make a reading selection easier to understand and remember.

·         lead a class discussion on what people read every day outside of school, such as billboards, menus, labels, magazines, newspapers, novels, credits at movies or on television, signs, maps, etc., and why they read them.

·         ask students to suggest how simple things could become complicated if a person did not understand the meaning of words in context. If possible, ask students to volunteer concrete examples of difficulties that have arisen because of misunderstood words.

·         explain the different types of reading and how each type is used. For example, skimming to get the gist of a paragraph, scanning to find key words, reading slowly for specific information or to follow directions, or skipping irrelevant information when reading for pleasure.

·         show students how to use specific reading techniques such as highlighting important information in a passage, making notes, or self-questioning on the content for recall.

·         give students a reading selection and have them outline the content. See Appendix 1.7.

·         show students how to rephrase information to remember or understand it (the teacher may wish to teach the students to create visual mnemonics).

·         hand out reading selections with technical or other words students will not know, and have them practise the decoding skills discussed. Students may work in groups and share their responses as a class. New words should be added to their personal dictionaries.

·         give the students a variety of reading selections and have them: identify which method of reading would be best suited to each selection; outline the content of the selection; and rephrase the selection to understand it. Have students discuss the purpose of the reading selection. The teacher may wish to use selections from other subject areas, guidance or community based literature to make the activity more meaningful and personal for students.

·         in the Portfolios of Written Work, have students write a reflection on how they feel about reading, and how they see the techniques learned in this lesson helping them in the future.

Assessment/Evaluation Techniques

Formative Assessment

·         Informal teacher observation (see Appendix 1.16) to ensure understanding of the concepts being taught

·         Completed reading strategies worksheets to ensure comprehension of techniques and strategies

·         Completed Portfolio of Written Work entries

·         Completed Personal Dictionary entries for continued vocabulary development and growth

Accommodations

The teacher is reminded to examine the students’ IEPs to make necessary accommodations and/or modifications. As well, the teacher should make suitable accommodations for ESL, ELD, and any other students who may require them.

 

·         Preferential/strategic seating

·         Reading partners

·         Consideration for students reluctant to read orally

·         Large print reading selections

·         Practice/rehearsal time to prepare for oral reading

·         Additional time to complete assigned tasks

·         Access to dual language dictionaries

·         Alternative notes

·         Additional/repeated instructions

Resources

Textbooks from other courses such as Mathematics, History, Science, etc.

Artman, John. Slanguage Activities and Ideas on the History and Nature of Language. New York: Crest Litho, Inc., 1980.

Books on methods for teaching reading such as:

Archer, Lynn, Cathy Costello, and Debbie Harvey. Reading and Writing for Success. Canada: Harcourt-Brace, 1999.

Shapiro, Nathaniel. Reading Efficiency. Scholastic Inc., 1980.

Steere, Amey, Caroline Z. Peck, and Linda Kahn. Solving Language Difficulties: Remedial Routines. Massachusetts: Educators Publishing Service, Inc., 1971.

Withington, Janice J. Genres of Literature. Thematic Study Guides and Bibliographies. California: Good Apple, a Division of Frank Schaffer Publications, 1996.

Materials on reading strategies for exceptional students (See Special Education Department for assistance.)

Pamphlets, church bulletins, labels, and maps.

Holy Bible, New Revised Standard Version, Catholic Edition. Tennessee: The Catholic Bible Press, a division of Thomas Nelson, Inc., 1993.

Canadian newspapers and magazines

A variety of forms – applications, guarantees, leases, etc.

Instruction manuals

Dictionaries and thesauri

Books on the roots of the English language

 

Activity 4:  Using Words Effectively, Vocabulary Development

Time: 120 minutes

Description

This activity is designed to help students improve their grasp of Standard Canadian English. Students will learn about spelling rules and mnemonics to improve their writing skills and discover how to use homonyms, synonyms, homophones, and antonyms to improve the clarity of their oral and written communication.

Strand(s) and Expectations

Ontario Catholic School Graduate Expectations:  2a, 2d, 3b, 4b, 5a.

Strand(s):  Reading Skills, Writing Skills

Overall Expectations:  REV.04, WRV.04, WRV.05.

Specific Expectations:  RE4.04, WR4.05, WR5.02 WR5.04.

Planning Notes

·         This activity is formative in nature. Students will be introduced to spelling rules and the vocabulary expanding techniques required for the writing process in this and other activities and units, as well as in other courses, the workplace and the community.

·         The teacher should take the results of the diagnostic assessment into account, and the amount of time spent on each activity should be adjusted accordingly.

·         The teachers will collect lists of synonyms, homonyms, homophones, words that confuse, antonyms, spelling rules, and spelling mnemonics to be given to the students as resources for future reference. The teacher should consider putting the more frequently used words on experience charts, laminate them, and place them around the classroom for a quick visual reminder.

·         The teacher prepares workstations based on each aspect of the topic covered in this unit – synonyms, homonyms, antonyms, confusing words, evolving language, technical language, homophones and spelling rules.

·         The teacher will prepare worksheets for the skills covered in the activity to be placed at each workstation.

·         The teacher will collect a variety of written selections for students to rewrite using expanded vocabulary.

·         The teacher will collect spelling aids for use by all students in the class – hand-held electronic spell checkers, spelling dictionaries, lists, etc.

·         Time in the Library/Resource Centre and Computer Lab should be arranged to allow students access to electronic dictionaries and thesauri.

·         The teacher should vary the way in which this material is presented and adjust the content and flow of this activity to best meet the needs of his/her students.

·         Reserve the Library/Resource Centre and the Computer Lab to allow students to examine on line spelling and language help, as well as learn how to use electronic spelling and grammar aids.

·         The teacher should ensure that students are familiar with the rules for use of the Library/Resource Centre and the Computer Lab, and the school board’s protocol for use of the Internet.

·         The teacher should examine the students’ IEPs to ensure that necessary accommodations and/or modifications are made for exceptional students as well as ESL and ELD students.

Prior Knowledge Required

Students will:

·         be aware of Library/Resource Centre and Internet rules;

·         have experience working in small groups;

·         be familiar with word processing programs and the grammar and spell checkers they include;

·         know how to find words in a dictionary or thesaurus;

·         be able to spell a large number of common words correctly;

·         understand that words are not always spelled the way they sound.

Teaching/Learning Strategies

The teacher will:

·         ask the students to brainstorm words that seem to have changed in meaning or function in the past few years  (e.g., mouse – a small rodent, a piece of computer equipment; or party, once only a noun, now also a verb). This is a good time to mention that many occupations have subject specific vocabulary. Have students brainstorm words associated with different occupations and careers.

·         demonstrate words that sound alike, but are written differently and have different meanings. Discuss how this makes no difference in speech, but how it can make a big difference in written communication. Have students give examples of such words and provide students with a list of commonly used homonyms.

·         put a few commonly used homophones on the board such as bear, dive, junk, mean, etc. Ask students to give a definition for each word. After each definition, ask students if that word has another meaning. With student input, generate a list of commonly used homophones. Give students dictionaries and have them look up some of the less common words. This is a good time to remind students that when looking up a word in the dictionary, the first definition is not always the appropriate one.

·         explain that there are words that are often confused because they sound almost the same, but that they have different meanings and many people use them incorrectly (e.g. assurance and insurance). See Appendix 1.8 for a sample list. There are a number of ways students can learn to identify those words – looking at prefixes, suffixes, root words, searching in the dictionary or thesaurus, or looking at the word’s origins.

·         stress that occasionally prefixes, suffixes, root words and root origins may not necessarily provide the correct meaning and students must be prepared to use dictionaries to find the correct meaning and usage of the word.

·         provide students with the first paragraph of a very short, simple story. Children’s stories work well for this. Using the paragraph, illustrate the concept of synonyms, words that have similar but not necessarily identical meanings (e.g., huge, large, big, wide, etc.) and give out a list of commonly used synonyms. As well, explain what a thesaurus is, and how it is used. Divide the class into small groups, and give each group a different paragraph from the same story. Ask them to replace all adjectives with a synonym. When finished, one person from each group will read their changes aloud. As a whole group, the class will discuss the impact of the synonyms on the story and its meaning.

·         discuss the different levels of language and the various ways of saying the same thing depending on the audience. Have the students write three short notes on the same topic: one to a close friend, one to a sibling, and one to their employer.

·         discuss the need for words that give the opposite meanings of words. These words must be more precise than just saying “not”. For example, “small” is more precise than “not big” which could be little, tiny, minuscule, or petite. Give students a list of common adjectives, and have them brainstorm a list of common antonyms. The teacher can add to the list if necessary.

·         ask the students to give a short form for someone’s name. Ask why people use short forms. Explain that sometimes people do the same thing with words. Together with the students, produce a list of common contractions.

·         provide the students with a selection of basic rules to assist with spelling. Among others, the teacher should include:

·         Every syllable in a word must have a vowel

·         The “i before e” rule

·         When to double a consonant when adding a suffix

·         How words are pluralized

·         How a silent “e” changes a short vowel into a long one

·         Words that must be memorized to be spelled correctly

·         For some students, making up silly sentences helps them remember difficult spellings; e.g., physician: Peter had your sister’s ice cream in a nibble. Students may do this activity for as many words as they need, but too many will lead to errors. Students who wish to use this method should keep their silly sentences in the other information section of their Personal Dictionaries.

·         Use the Jigsaw method (see Appendix 1.13) to assign follow up activities on the various aspects covered in this activity. You will need three home groups with eight students per group. Ensure that students are using the resource sheets and making the necessary corrections. Complete the Jigsaw process with information sharing. Use Appendix 1.15 to assess the activity.

Students will:

·         Listen attentively.

·         Work collaboratively with their peers.

·         Ask questions for clarification.

·         Complete assignments.

·         Add information to their Personal Dictionaries.

·         Comment on the benefits of clear communication in the workplace and the community in their Portfolios of Written Work.

Assessment/Evaluation Techniques

Formative Assessment

·         Personal Dictionary entries to continue vocabulary growth and enrichment

·         Informal teacher observation to make sure content is understood (see Appendix 1.16)

·         Completed and corrected worksheets to verify that the students have improved their skills according to the new concepts being discussed

·         Collaboration in groups for sharing and exploring ideas (see Appendix 1.15)

·         Portfolio of Written Work entries

Accommodations

·         Preferential/strategic seating

·         Peer tutor or help from the Special Education staff

·         Additional time for completing worksheets

·         Opportunity to use hand-held technological devices and computers to assist in completing worksheets

·         Use of dual language dictionaries

·         Enlarged print texts

Resources

Grammar textbooks such as:

Archer, Lynn, Cathy Costello, and Debbie Harvey. Reading and Writing for Success. Canada: Harcourt-Brace, 1999.

Artman, John. Slanguage Activities and Ideas on the History and Nature of Language. New York: Crest Litho, Inc., 1980.

Bunnell, Jean. 400 Words That Work: A Lifeskills Vocabulary Program. Maine: J. Weston Walsh, Publisher, 1992.

Canadian Writer’s Companion. Toronto, Prentice Hall Canada, Inc., 1997.

Cramer, Ronald L. Building Concrete Writing Skills. Michigan: The Instructor Publications, Inc., 1982.

Elliott, Rebecca. Painless Grammar. New York: Barron’s Educational Services, Inc., 1997.

George, Jerry. Good Grief! Good Grammar! A Basic (and Short) Guide to Standard English. Markham: Pembroke Publishing, 1994.

Grizzard, Mabel Youree. Language Exercises revised (9 workbooks). Texas: Stech-Vaughn Company, 1984.

Hopper, Vincent F., Cedric Gale, Ronald C. Foote, and Benjamin W. Griffith. Essentials of English. New York: Barron’s Educational Series, Inc., 1990.

Language Arts Survival Guide. Toronto, Prentice Hall Canada, Inc., 1997.

McFarlane, J.A. (Sandy) and Warren Clements. Style Book 1996: A Guide to Language and Usage. Toronto: Penguin Books, 1996.

Pacemaker’s Passage to Basic English. Scarborough: Globe Fearon (Prentice Hall Ginn), 1999.

Dictionaries and thesauri

Electronic dictionary and thesauri

Websites

http://www.grammarlady.com/

http://www.grammarnow.com/

http://www.dailygrammar.com/

http://andromeda.rutgers.edu/~jlynch/writing

http://www.grammarbook.com/

http://webster.commnet.edu/hp/pages/darling/grammar.htm

http://www.edunet.com/english/grammar

http://www.luther.bc.ca/~dave7cnv/cdnspelling/cndspelling.html

http://www.web.net/cornerstone/cndeng.htm

http://library.utoronto.ca/www/writing/books6.html

http://www.kenevacorp.mb.ca.service.htm#Writing

Spelling textbooks

Reading Anthologies

Textbooks from other courses to use for spelling words

Lists of technical vocabulary, such as words used in computer technology, science, etc.

 

Activity 5:  Using Research Skills: Annotated Bibliography

Time:  100 minutes

Description

This assignment will introduce students to the research skills required in other units, and other courses, strengthen reading skills introduced in Activity 3, and prepare students for the writing process to follow. In addition, students will use a variety of print and electronic texts, and make notes on the essential information from the sources they have selected. The final product, an annotated bibliography, will be compiled and edited on a word processor.

Strand(s) and Expectations

Ontario Catholic School Graduate Expectations:  2c, 2d, 2e, 4a, 7b, 7g.

Strand(s):  Reading Skills, Writing Skills

Overall Expectations:  REV.01, REV.02, REV.04, WRV.01, WRV.02, WRV.03, WRV.04, WRV.05.

Specific Expectations:  RE1.01, RE1.02, RE1.04, RE2.05, RE4.01, RE4.03, RE4.04, WR1.01, WR1.02, WR1.03, WR1.04, WR2.03, WR3.01, WR3.02, WR4.01, WR4.02, WR4.03, WR4.05, WR5.02, WR5.03, WR5.04.

Planning Notes

·         Topics for research should be cross-curricular, workplace, or community oriented. Consider the following options:

·         Research a current topic for an assignment for another course.

·         Research a particular job or career choice.

·         Research the life of a saint or of a biblical figure, or an aspect of the Catholic Church such as a local parish, missionaries in the world, or the Vatican.

·         Research a local hero, or event.

·         It is necessary to book the Library/Resource Centre and the Computer Lab for the full time required by this activity so that all students will have access to word processing equipment.

·         The teacher should collect samples of annotated bibliographies to show students prior to the start of their research, and consult with the teacher/librarian to ensure that students are shown how to use electronic card catalogues to find topic-related materials.

·         The teacher should refer to students’ IEPs in order to make necessary accommodations and/or modifications.

Prior Knowledge Required

Students will:

·         be aware of different reading methods needed for research such as skimming and scanning;

·         be familiar with computers and be able to use a variety of sources for research;

·         be aware of the Library/Resource Centre rules and regulations;

·         be aware of the school board protocol for Internet use and be prepared to abide by it;

·         be familiar with the word processing software available in the school.

Teaching and Learning Strategies

·         The teacher will remind students of the school board protocol regarding proper Internet and computer use.

·         The teacher will provide an example for each source to be used and explain the content and format of the annotations required for this assignment.

·         Students will choose a topic based on the requirements outlined by their teacher.

·         Students will skim a variety of resources on their topic, make notes, and select a few sources for closer examination.

·         Students will clearly identify each resource selected based on the samples provided by the teacher (e.g., from the Ontario Modern Language Association, American Psychological Association, etc.).

·         Students will write three-to-five sentence long descriptions of the reference, directly beneath the appropriate bibliographical entry. Annotations should outline the contents of the resource, and consider its usefulness for potential research assignments.

·         Students will use both electronic and print texts in their entries (the teacher may stipulate the number of books, magazines, websites, and articles required for the assignment).

·         Students will type, revise, and edit their work on a word processor using spelling and grammar checkers.

·         Students will organize their entries in a logical order (e.g., alphabetical, or categorical).

·         The teacher will observe and monitor the progress and direction of student activity.

·         Students will share their annotated bibliographies with their classmates.

·         In their Portfolios of Written Work, students will comment on the ease/difficulty of their research and suggest ways to improve it next time.

Assessment/Evaluation Techniques

Formative Assessment

·         Informal teacher observation to ensure everyone understands the assignment (see Appendix 1.16)

·         Teacher-designed checklist to assess research skills and annotated bibliography

·         Portfolios of Written Work entry

·         Personal Dictionary entries

Accommodations

·         Assistance with organizational skills

·         Dual language dictionaries

·         Peer assistance with word processing as required

Resources

Newspapers, magazines, and journals

CD-ROMs

Word processing software

Internet

Printed research materials such as textbooks, biographies, encyclopedia, etc.

 

Activity 6:  The Writing Process: A Five-step Plan

Time:  240 minutes

Description

In this activity, students will examine and practise the five step writing process. They will familiarize themselves with the basic format of the paragraph, the different reasons why people write and the different types of writing they do, e.g., narrative, descriptive, opinion, persuasive, technical, instructive, letter writing, note making/note taking, etc. They will also discuss the writer’s need to be aware of the intended audience. Students will use the various skills covered in the first four activities to edit, and revise their work, showing an understanding of the conventions of Standard Canadian English.

Strand(s) and Expectations

Ontario Catholic Graduate Student Expectations:  2a, 2c, 2d, 2e, 3b, 4a, 4b, 5a.

Strand(s):  Reading Skills, Writing Skills

Overall Expectations:  REV.01, REV.04, WRV.01, WRV.02, WRV.03, WRV.04, WRV.05.

Specific Expectations:  RE1.04, RE4.02, RE4.04, WR1.01, WR1.02, WR1.03, WR2.01, WR3.02, WR3.03, WR4.01, WR4.02, WR4.03, WR4.04, WR5.01, WR5.02, WR5.03, WR5.04.

Planning Notes

·         This activity is formative in nature. Summative assessment will take place when the skills introduced here are used in subsequent units.

·         This activity is designed to improve the students’ writing by increasing their knowledge of the style and purpose for writing.

·         The teacher will collect and collate material on writing as a process, to be used to prepare lessons.

·         Students will be reminded to use the Gospel values of honesty, kindness, generosity, respect, and self-control when working as a team, sharing information and helping one another improve basic skills.

·         The teacher will explain the need for positive feedback and suggestions for improvement and provide students with checklists to use in peer and self-editing activities.

·         The teacher will provide sample paragraphs and templates for the different types of writing, e.g., descriptive, narrative, opinion, persuasive, technical, instructive, letter writing, note making/note taking, etc.

·         Collect samples of real-estate ads, travel brochures, greeting cards, diaries, journals, and narratives for students to examine.

·         In planning these lessons, the teacher should ensure that the material is presented such that all types of learners benefit – auditory, visual, and kinesthetic.

·         The teacher will ensure that students are familiar with the word processing programs available in the school, and book time in the Library/Resource Centre and Computer Lab for the writing portions of the activity. The teacher ensures that technical help is available to the students.

·         The teacher will inform students about access to computers in other locations such as the Public Library/Resource Centre or Internet Cafes where students can use the technology outside of school hours. It is important to remind students of the dangers of unrestricted Internet access, and the costs involved using Internet Café computers.

·         The teacher will check any students IEPs to ensure that all necessary accommodations and/or modifications are made for these students and any others who may require such assistance in order to be successful in the course.

Prior Knowledge Required

The student will:

·         know the difference between a sentence and a paragraph;

·         be aware of the school board’s protocol for Internet use and be prepared to abide by it;

·         be familiar with the computer software available in the school for word processing;

·         be able to make simple diagrams to list ideas for writing, e.g., tree diagrams, word lists, and mappings, as taught in previous English courses;

·         have completed the classroom activities on the conventions of Standard Canadian English.

Teaching/Learning Strategies

The teacher will:

·         lead a discussion on what sort of things people write in their daily lives, e.g., lists, notes, memos, letters, reports, explanations, directions, diaries and journals, etc.

·         discuss the way written material is transmitted from one person to the next, e.g., newspapers, books, magazines, e-mail, letters, etc.

·         discuss how different types of writing are necessary to convey different types of information, e.g., poems are used in greeting cards; descriptive paragraphs are used in real estate ads and travel brochures, narrative paragraphs are used to tell stories and provide factual information.

·         provide students with copies of a variety of the above materials to examine and share their opinions on the writing styles and formats.

·         give students samples of each of the main types of writing that will be done in the activity: descriptive, explanatory, opinion, narrative, etc. These samples may be student-generated, from exemplars from other courses, or they may be selected from literary sources, newspapers, brochures, etc.

·         teach a lesson explaining the actual five-step writing process – brainstorming for ideas, writing, peer conferencing and editing, revising, and publishing. See Appendix 1.9. The purpose for each step should be stressed with particular care being given to the fact that revising is more than copying it out again in your best handwriting or typing it.

·         give the students a template to explain the format of a good paragraph – topic sentence, body with support, closing sentence. The idea of a hamburger works well. The top and bottom buns represent the topic and closing sentence. The meat and condiments represent the body of the paragraph. Only things that belong between the buns should be in the hamburger just like only relevant information should be between the topic and closing sentences.

·         stress that the opening and closing sentences in a paragraph or the opening and closing paragraphs in an essay should reflect one another to ensure the coherence of the piece.

·         discuss the need for clear, coherent, concise, creative, and correct writing.

·         show students two paragraphs written on the same topic, one should be well written, the other one poorly done. Discuss why one paragraph is better than the other one.

·         give students copies of poorly written paragraphs (narrative, instructional, etc.). As teams, students will examine each paragraph and discuss what could be done to improve it. Students will rewrite the paragraphs and as a group the class will examine the corrected paragraphs.

·         have students examine the sample paragraphs given at the beginning of the activity. Using the descriptive paragraph first, have students write a similar paragraph.

·         following the steps outlines in the writing process, have students peer conference, edit, and revise their paragraphs.

·         provide students with the opportunity to write, and revise at least two other types of paragraphs. Revised paragraphs should be placed in the Portfolios of Written Work.

·         examine with the class the current formats used for informal and formal letters and the parts of the letter: writer’s address, date, inside address, salutation, body, complimentary closing and signature. Show students samples of different formal and informal letters.

·         have students write two letters, one personal or friendly, the other formal or business. To be effective, the letters should be real for the students. Suggestions could be a letter to a friend or classmate, a letter applying for a part-time job, or a letter asking information about a new product or service. Remind students to use the level of language best suited to their audience and purpose for writing.

·         explain the purpose of self and peer editing and the use of checklists to evaluate the effectiveness of one’s own writing and that of a peer (see Appendices 1.10, 1.11).

·         stress the need to check writing for spelling, grammar, punctuation, or word usage errors prior to the conferencing stage and again during revisions.

·         once students understand the basics of paragraph production, discuss multi-paragraph-writing assignments such as essays and reports that are done regularly in other courses as well as in the workplace.

·         emphasize the importance of planning, brainstorming, outlining, and following each step of the writing process for all formal writing assignments.

Students will:

·         make notes of the information provided by the teacher.

·         collect sample paragraphs to be used as models and keep these in their personal dictionaries..

·         complete all assignments given by the teacher.

·         update their personal dictionaries with new words and expressions.

·         participate in self-editing and peer-editing using checklists provided by the teacher.

·         share observations and comments with sensitivity to the feelings and needs of others.

·         have the opportunity to participate fully in each stage of the writing process.

·         have the opportunity to use electronic aids to assist with the writing process.

·         in their Portfolios of Written Work, students will comment in writing on the need to revise and edit written work, and why this can be critical in the workplace.

Assessment/Evaluation Techniques

Formative Assessment

·         Informal teacher observation to ensure participation in all activities (see Appendix 1.16)

·         Teacher-student conferences to discuss the material and provide assistance

·         Peer conferences for sharing ideas

·         Peer-editing checklists to assist others with the writing (Appendix 1.11)

·         Self-editing checklists for reflection on the writing (Appendix 1.10)

·         Paragraphs assessed using the Paragraph Rubric (see Appendix 1.3)

·         Letters assessed using the Letter Rubric (see Appendix 1.4)

·         Completed paragraph assignments to show an understanding of the concepts learned

Summative Evaluation

·         Personal Dictionary entries using Personal Dictionary Rubric (see Appendix 1.17)

·         Portfolio of Written Work entries according to Rubric (see Appendix 1.18)

Accommodations

·         Preferential/strategic seating

·         Peer tutor or help from Special Education staff or Computer Technician

·         Enlarged print texts

·         Dual language dictionaries

·         Alternative notes

Resources

Books on how to teach writing as a process such as:

Archer, Lynn, Cathy Costello, and Debbie Harvey. Reading and Writing for Success. Canada: Harcourt-Brace, 1999.

Withington, Janice J. Genres of Literature. Thematic Study Guides and Bibliographies. California: Good Apple, a Division of Frank Schaffer Publications, 1996.

Pre-selected sample paragraphs

Computers and the necessary software for word processing

Samples of personal and business letters, reports, resumes, etc.

Websites

http://andromeda.rutgers.edu/~jlynch/writing

http://www.luther.bc.ca/~dave7cnv/cdnspelling/cndspelling.html

http://www.web.net/cornerstone/cndeng.htm

http://library.utoronto.ca/www/writing/books6.html

http://www.kenevacorp.mb.ca.service.htm#Writing


Appendix 1.1

Reading Comprehension Activity

 

Name:

 

Read the following passage, and answer the questions that follow.

 

The little brown bat’s radar warns him that there are several juicy moths ahead. He swoops towards them, and suddenly a child screams. Why? Because for centuries, the harmless little brown bat has both frightened and fascinated people everywhere.

For several centuries, bats have been associated with terrifying legends of vampires and witchcraft. According to folklore, the vampire leaves its grave at sundown, assumes the shape of a bat, and flies around the countryside searching for victims to slake its thirst for human blood before returning to its coffin at sunrise. Tomb bats, nocturnal insect eaters found by the thousands in the old abandoned castles of Europe probably contributed to this myth.

The legendary, cruel exploits of Vlad Dracule, an eastern European tyrant also called Vlad the Impaler, led to Bram Stoker’s creation of the novel, Dracula, and further joined the poor little bat to the tales of the un-dead.

Similarly, witches and warlocks also contributed to the bat’s bad reputation. Long affiliated with Satan and his minions, these so-called servants of evil were said to use bats in magic potions designed to reap vengeance on their enemies and force the innocent to do the devil’s bidding. Bats are one of the primary symbols of the feast of darkness, Halloween.

Because of this misinformation, humanity has come to fear a useful and necessary creature. In a single night, the little brown bat, native to much North America, including eastern Ontario eats half its weight in insects and pollinates several species of flowers and trees.

S. Matthews

Vocabulary

In your own words, explain the meaning of the words underlined in the text:

 

swoops, fascinated, terrifying, folklore, assumes, slake, nocturnal, exploits, affiliated, minions, primary, misinformation, humanity, native.

Comprehension Questions

Please answer in complete sentences.

1.   Why did the child scream?

2.   What is a vampire?

3.   Explain two things that contributed to the myth of bats and vampires.

4.   Why are bats used as symbols at Halloween?

5.   How are bats useful?

6.   In what way has the information provided affected the way you view bats?

7.   Who would be the people who would most benefit from this information about bats?

8.   Bats are an endangered species. If there were a bat flying around in your bedroom, what would you do to rescue it?

 


Appendix 1.2

Grammar Skills Review

 

Name:

 

1.   Correct the following sentences. Errors include missing capital letters, and punctuation.

·         ontario quebec and alberta are all canadian provinces

·         mary told me about the accident but who told you

·         look out

·         havent you done any work yet peter

·         my sister joan lives in lancaster we live in cornwall

 

2.   Follow the instructions beside each word to give the required answer (synonyms mean the same thing, homonyms sound the same and antonyms mean the opposite).

·         prevent

(synonym)

_____________________

·         repair

(antonym)

_____________________

·         pray

(homonym)

_____________________

·         sense

(homonym)

_____________________

·         expensive

(antonym)

_____________________

·         inn

(synonym)

_____________________

 

3.   Circle the subject and underline the verb in each sentence.

·         Your note about the party didn’t give the time.

·         Mike and Shelly drove to Toronto.

·         There were many people at the convention.

·         Near the house on the corner stands an old pecan tree.

·         My cousin, Tommy, fell out of the tree and broke his arm.

 

4.   Identify the parts of speech in the following sentences using the abbreviations given: noun (N), verb (V), adjective (ADJ), adverb (ADV), article (AR), conjunction (C) preposition (P), and pronoun (PRO).

·         He stirred the pudding constantly, but it still scorched on the bottom.

·         Slowly the huge bear climbed the steep cliff and disappeared into the cave.

·         When is Mary’s birthday?

 

5.   Classify each of the following sentences as simple, compound, or complex.

·         Bring me a glass of wine. __________________

·         Ellen always writes letters that are interesting. __________________

·         My best friend is a hockey player, but I am good at soccer. ___________________

·         When I start something I enjoy, I always manage to get it finished. __________________

·         In early days, girls didn’t have the opportunity to go to school. _____________________

·         James loves hamburgers, and I love hot dogs. _________________________

 


Appendix 1.2  (Continued)

 

6.   The following sentences do not make sense the way they are written. Correct them.

·         Yesterday I found a green boy’s bathing suit

·         I packed a lunch in a basket and ate it at the beach.

·         We couldn’t see nothing through the fog.

·         Me and Harry seen Tom at the concert.

·         Have you wrote to your sister?

·         That is the most large pig I have ever seen.

 

7.   Select the correct word to fill in the blank and underline it.

·         Who is the (principal, principle) of this school?

·         (There, they’re, their) are (to, two, too) many accidents (dew, due) (too, to, two) bad driving.

·         Did you (hear, here) the (wrap, rap) at the door?

·         Mary looked (pail, pale) when she heard about the (bare, bear) at the (peek, peak,) of the hill.

 

8.   Combine the following sentences into one sentence.

·         The children are triplets. The children belong to Mrs. Howard. They are boys. They have red hair. They have freckles on their noses.

·         My father enjoys fishing. My father goes fishing early in the morning. My father fishes for trout. My father goes fly-fishing. My father does this every sunny Saturday morning. My father goes fishing alone.

 

9.   Complete the following passage by filling in the blanks with the best word from the list provide:

freedom, defeated, Napoleon, confiscated, Americans, threat, deserters, soldiers, Canada, choice, ambassador, ships, armies

 

In 1812 the British, whom the Americans had _________________ in the Revolutionary War,

 

were once more a ____________________ to the Americans. Britain had gone to war with France,

 

governed by the Emperor __________________ to prevent his conquest of Europe. In order to do

 

this, the British attempted a trade embargo on France. American ____________ were stopped and

 

____________________ because they were believed to contain British ____________________ as

 

well as provisions for Napoleon’s _______________. Despite numerous complaints from the

 

American ________________ to Britain, the British refused to stop harassing the

 

__________________. In the end, the Americans had no ________________ but to declare war on

 

Britain and her colonies including _________________. No __________________ were sent to

 

Canada, but the colonists were only too happy to fight for their ___________________.

S. Matthews


Appendix 1.2  (Continued)

 

10.  Select one of the following topics, and write a paragraph about it. Give your paragraph a suitable title.

·         My bedroom is a mess.

·         How to make the world’s best snack.

·         The way you dress tells a lot about you.

 

11.  Using correct letter format taught in previous English courses, write one of the following letters.

·         A letter to a friend describing your new classes.

·         A letter to your employer requesting a change in your work schedule.

·         A letter to apply for a job after school.

 


Appendix 1.3

Paragraph Rubric

 

Name:

Criteria

Limited

Level 1

Some

Level 2

Considerable

Level 3

Thorough

Level 4

Knowledge/Understanding

 

 

 

 

Topic sentence effectively introduces the paragraph.

 

 

 

 

Sentences in the body are on topic.

 

 

 

 

Transition words are used to link the sentences in the body to the topic sentences.

 

 

 

 

Closing sentence effectively concludes the paragraph.

 

 

 

 

Thinking/Inquiry

 

 

 

 

A variety of sentence types are used in the paragraph (simple, compound, complex).

 

 

 

 

Ideas are arranged in a logical order.

 

 

 

 

The paragraph demonstrates thought and reflection.

 

 

 

 

Communication

 

 

 

 

The meaning of the paragraph is clear.

 

 

 

 

The paragraph shows creativity.

 

 

 

 

The paragraph is concise.

 

 

 

 

Application

 

 

 

 

The paragraph shows an understanding of the rules of grammar and punctuation.

 

 

 

 

The paragraph shows a grasp of spelling and word knowledge.

 

 

 

 

The paragraph makes real-life connections as a means to communicate information.

 

 

 

 


Appendix 1.3  (Continued)

Additional Criteria for Multi-Paragraph Assignments

 

The introductory paragraph introduces the topic and the approach that will be used to discuss it.

 

 

 

 

The other paragraphs in the body are linked to the introductory paragraph and the topic.

 

 

 

 

The concluding paragraph sums up the topic and ends the work by tying up all the loose ends.

 

 

 

 

Note: A student whose achievement is below level 1 (50%) has not met the expectations for this assignment or activity.

 


Appendix 1.4

Letter Rubric

 

Name:

 

Limited

Level 1

Some

Level 2

Considerable

Level 3

Thorough

Level 4

Knowledge/Understanding

 

 

 

 

The correct style – formal/business, friendly/personal was used.

 

 

 

 

The letter format is appropriate to the type of letter required (inside address, date, salutation, complimentary closing, and signature).

 

 

 

 

The body of the letter showed a distinct introduction, topic information and conclusion.

 

 

 

 

A good variety of sentences were used in the paragraphs of the letter.

 

 

 

 

Necessary transition words were used in the body of the letter.

 

 

 

 

Thinking and Inquiry

 

 

 

 

The gist of the letter is well organized and insightful.

 

 

 

 

The topic was presented in a logical order.

 

 

 

 

The topic was approached using creativity to catch the reader’s attention.

 

 

 

 

Communication

 

 

 

 

The letter was clear and the message easily understood.

 

 

 

 

The level of language was appropriate to the receiver.

 

 

 

 

Technical language was used correctly when required.

 

 

 

 

All necessary information was readily available (phone numbers, times, dates, etc.).

 

 

 

 

Application

 

 

 

 

Connections have been made between how to write a letter and the workplace or the community depending on the style of the letter.

 

 

 

 

There is evidence that all stages of the writing process were used.

 

 

 

 

The work is free of spelling and grammar errors.

 

 

 

 

Note: A student whose achievement is below level 1 (50%) has not met the expectations for this assignment or activity.

 


Appendix 1.5

 

our father

 

our father who art in heaven hallowed be thy name thy kingdom come thy will be done on earth as it is in heaven give us this day our daily bread and forgive us our trespasses as we forgive those who trespass against us lead us not into temptation but deliver us from evil amen

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Our Father

 

            Our Father, who art in heaven, hallowed be Thy name, Thy kingdom come, Thy will be done, on earth as it is in heaven.

            Give us this day our daily bread, and forgive us our trespasses as we forgive those who trespass against us. Lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from evil. Amen.


Appendix 1.6

Sample List of Regular Verbs

 

Verb

Present Tense

Past Tense

Past Participle

to walk

walk

walked

walked

to visit

visit

visited

visited

to follow

follow

followed

followed

to talk

talk

talked

talked

to add

add

added

added

to divide

divide

divided

divided

to work

work

worked

worked

to miss

miss

missed

missed

to turn

turn

turned

turned

to laugh

laugh

laughed

laughed

to dance

dance

danced

danced

to send

send

sent

sent

to bend

bend

bent

bent

 

Sample List of Irregular Verbs

 

to see

see

saw

seen

to take

take

took

taken

to go

go

went

gone

to eat

eat

ate

eaten

to come

come

came

come

to run

run

ran

run

to give

give

gave

given

to do

do

did

done

to know

know

knew

known

to grow

grow

grew

grown

to fall

fall

fell

fallen

to write

write

wrote

written

to drink

drink

drank

drunk

to sing

sing

sang

sung

to ring

ring

rang

rung

to break

break

broke

broken

to speak

speak

spoke

spoken

to choose

choose

chose

chosen

to freeze

freeze

froze

frozen

to throw

throw

threw

thrown

to blow

blow

blew

blown

to fly

fly

flew

flown

to draw

draw

drew

drawn

to begin

begin

began

begun

to bring

bring

brought

brought

 

Future Tense: To conjugate the future, you use the present tense plus the helping verb will/shall (I shall cry. He will sing. You will dance)


Appendix 1.7

Outlining For Reading Comprehension and Note Making

 

Outlining is a simple step-by-step approach to making notes and thus increase reading comprehension. The steps are as follows:

1.   Read the title of the story or the heading on the paragraph if there is one.

2.   Read the first paragraph.

3.   Write down the main idea in the paragraph. (Hint: look for the topic sentence.)

4.   Write down the main idea as a title.

5.   In point form, write down the information that supports the title you have given the paragraph.

6.   Does the information in the first paragraph relate to the title of the story or the heading of the paragraph? If so, how does it do this? Write out your answer.

7.   Proceed to the next paragraph and repeat steps 3, 4, and 5.

8.   How is the second paragraph linked to the first? Write out your answer.

9.   Continue this way until you have finished reading the entire selection and your notes are complete.

 

Example:

Humanity’s Best Friend – the Cat?

 

            In ancient Egypt, cats were accepted and revered because of their excellent mousing skills. Grain was kept in the temples, and the temple priests, who truly appreciated the cat’s abilities, consecrated the felines to the goddess, Bast, who represented abundance and life, and was depicted with the head of a cat. Tomb paintings from as early as 1600 BC show cats in a variety of settings; some are tied to chairs with jewelled collars and leaches, others are being fed fish or fowl. When a cat died, the animal was mummified and placed in a tomb along with mummified rodents intended as food for it in the afterlife. The owner and his family would shave their eyebrows as a sign of mourning. The Egyptian penalty for killing a cat was death! One story has it that a visiting army was able to conquer a city by arming its soldiers with cats; no one would shoot at them for fear of harming the animals.

S. Matthews

Outline:

·         The title tells us that cats are man’s best friends.

·         The paragraph is about how important cats were in Egypt.

Cats were very important in Ancient Egypt

·         They kept the mice from eating the grain.

·         They were sacred to the goddess, Bast

·         They were well treated and well fed by their owners.

·         Their bodies were preserved when they died.

·         The owners would mourn for their cat publicly by shaving their eyebrows.

·         The penalty for killing a cat was death.

·         An army conquered a city because no one wanted to kill the cats it carried.

·         The paragraph relates to the topic because it explains why and how cats were important to the Egyptians. The story of the conquering army proves how serious the Egyptians were about cats.


Appendix 1.8

Sample Words that Confuse

(Remember to look at prefixes, suffixes, and root words.)

 

Affect (to influence) – effect (result)

 

Allusion (reference) – illusion (false perception, a trick) – delusion (false belief)

 

Assure (to set a person’s mind at ease) – insure (to guarantee life or property against harm) – ensure (to secure from harm)

 

Avoid (shun) – prevent (stop) – avert (turn away)

 

Between (used when referring to two people, places, or things) – among (used when referring to more than two people, places, or things)

 

Complement (something that completes) – compliment (an expression of praise)

 

Contagious (transmittable by contact) – infectious (capable of causing infection)

 

Eminent (important) – imminent (soon to happen)

 

Imply (to hint or suggest) – infer (to draw a conclusion based on fact)

 

Latter (the second of two things) – later (at another time)

 

Older (refers to persons and things) – elder (refers only to people)

 

Oral (refers to what is spoken, said aloud) – verbal (refers to both spoken and written words)

 

Persecute (to oppress or harass) – prosecute (to take someone to court for a crime or other legal action)

 

Piteous (pathetic) – pitiable (sad, regretful) – pitiful (inferior, insignificant)

 

Principle (basic law or truth) – principal (chief)

 

Quite (very) – quiet (hushed)

 

Raise (to move upward; to breed) – rear (the back; to bring up a child) – rise (to go up, to ascend)

 

Sit (to rest) – set (to place, to put in place)

 

Stationary (that cannot move) – stationery (paper and envelopes)

 

Tasteful (proper in a social setting) – tasty (having a pleasant flavour)

 


Appendix 1.9

 

For the Writing Process to be successful, it is essential that students understand the need for each of its steps. As well, they must be given clear indicators as to how the written work will be assessed. Appendix 1.3 should be used as a standard for assessing all paragraphs. A separate category can be added to address a particular type of paragraph. Students should be provided with the checklist prior to beginning any and all written assignments. Appendix 1.4 should be used to assess letters with additional categories added according to the letter to be evaluated. Effort should always be made to connect writing to the workplace.

 

WRITING AS A FIVE-STEP PROCESS

Step 1:  Brainstorming

            In this step, the students generate topics on which to write. Discussing a piece of literature, a topic, or a picture can do this. The teacher puts a list of broad topic suggestions on the board and then asks the students to elaborate on some or all of them. These ideas serve as the raw material from which the student will select an idea for the writing assignment.

Step 2:  Writing

            In this step, the students must do two things. First they make a simple outline of their proposed writing. With a paragraph, students are encouraged to write the topic sentence, three key points and the support for them, and the closing sentence. In an essay, this stage requires the writing of the introductory sentence, the thesis and the thesis blueprint, the supporting details for each thesis point and the conclusion.

            The next thing to do is the rough draft of the writing assignment according to the outline. Because it is so much easier to correct, if possible, all actual writing should be done on a computer or word processor. When the first/rough draft is finished, students should examine it to make sure it is complete. The Author’s Checklist for Self Editing (Appendix 1.10) can be used for this purpose, or the teacher may opt to develop another checklist more specific to each different writing assignment. When the students are satisfied that they have met the necessary criteria, they move on to Step 3.

Step 3:  Peer Editing/Conferencing

In this step, students use a checklist to examine and assess each other’s work (see Appendix 1.11). They then share their interpretations and ideas with the author. If time permits, more than one peer editing session may occur.

Step 4:  Revising, Editing, And Polishing

            After the students receive feedback from their peers, they work on correcting and improving their piece of writing. Student/teacher conferences should take place at this point. The teacher should encourage students to ask for advice with awkward sentences or to use the advice available electronically in word processing programs. Students should also be reminded to check for grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors at this point.

Step 5:  Final Draft/Publication

            When the students are satisfied with the quality of their writing and feel it is complete, they produce a final draft, and present it for evaluation. Writing is more meaningful if it has a real purpose and reaches a greater audience. The teacher should encourage students to share their writing efforts with others.

 


Appendix 1.10

Author’s Checklist – Self Editing

For Paragraphs

Criteria

Yes

No

Have I given my written assignment a suitable title?

 

 

If my assignment has more than one paragraph, do all of the paragraphs relate to the topic?

 

 

If I have more than one paragraph, is there a clear introduction, body and conclusion to the work?

 

 

If I have more than one paragraph, are the paragraphs properly connected to each other and the topic with transitions?

 

 

Did I choose the best type of paragraph style for my topic?

 

 

Is the main idea in each paragraph clear and easy to understand?

 

 

Does my topic sentence introduce the main idea?

 

 

Do the other sentences in the paragraph support the main idea?

 

 

Are my sentences in logical order?

 

 

Have I used transition words to link the sentences to the topic sentence?

 

 

Have I used a variety of sentence types in each paragraph?

 

 

Have I used a variety of words instead of repeating the same ones all the time?

 

 

Does my closing sentence conclude my paragraph effectively?

 

 

Did I check my work for spelling, grammar, or punctuation errors?

 

 

Have I done what I set out to do in terms of the topic?

 

 

 

For Letters

Criteria

Yes

No

Have I selected the right style of letter for my purpose (formal/business, personal/friendly)?

 

 

Have I used the right level of language for my letter?

 

 

Does my letter have a sender’s address, the date, the inside address, the salutation, the complimentary closing, and the signature as required?

 

 

Is the layout of the letter in keeping with its style and purpose?

 

 

Does the first paragraph of my letter clearly introduce the purpose of my letter?

 

 

Do the subsequent paragraphs add the necessary information for the purpose of the letter?

 

 

Does the closing paragraph clearly state what the next step or follow up to the letter should be?

 

 

Have I given all necessary addresses, phone numbers, dates etc.?

 

 

Have I verified the spelling of and the names of those mentioned in my letter?

 

 

Is the letter free from spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors?

 

 

 


Appendix 1.11

Peer Editing Checklist

 

Criteria

Yes

No

Comment

The paragraph(s) was on topic.

 

 

 

The paragraph(s) clearly showed an understanding of the topic.

 

 

 

Paragraph(s) indicates insight and thought on the topic required.

 

 

 

The topic sentence of the paragraph(s) effectively introduced the topic

 

 

 

The body of the paragraph(s) has information to support the topic sentence.

 

 

 

Information on the topic is incorporated efficiently into the body of the paragraph(s).

 

 

 

Each sentence in the paragraph(s) has a transition word to link it to the topic.

 

 

 

There are a variety of sentences used in the paragraph(s).

 

 

 

Words used in the paragraph(s) are varied and not repetitive.

 

 

 

There is a closing sentence that concludes the paragraph(s).

 

 

 

There are no grammar errors that you can see.

 

 

 

There are no punctuation errors or capitalization errors that you can see.

 

 

 

Words are spelled correctly.

 

 

 

If this is a multi-paragraph assignment, is there a definite opening paragraph and closing paragraph?

 

 

 

In a multi-paragraph piece, are the paragraphs in the body on topic and relevant?

 

 

 

Are multiple paragraphs linked with proper transition words?

 

 

 

If the assignment is a letter, is it the right kind of letter for the topic it addresses?

 

 

 

If this is a letter, is the layout correct and is all the necessary information clearly identified?

 

 

 

REMEMBER: KEEP YOUR COMMENTS POSITIVE!!!!!


Appendix 1.12

Teamwork And Group Dynamics

Working in groups, pairs, or teams, is not a new concept for students because they have been doing so ever since starting school, joining a group, or a sports’ team, being involved in a community activity, holding down a part-time job, volunteering, or being a member of a family unit. This course profile includes a number of activities to be done in pairs or small groups. More and more, employers are emphasizing the need for strong interpersonal skills and an ability to work effectively as part of a larger group. Staff members are required to work together as a team to solve any number of problems, and the ability to work together collaboratively and efficiently must be learned and practised regularly. It is essential that all students understand the need to work proficiently and on-task within groups, and to learn to deal sensibly with their peers especially when they disagree. Here are some strategies that may help with group work in a classroom.

1.   To select random groups, decide how many groups are needed, and how many members each group will have. Write the numbers 1-? as many times as required on small slips of paper. Students draw a slip of paper from a bag. All 1’s form one group, 2’ s form another and so on. Each member of the group is renumbered 1, 2, 3, 4, etc.

2.   If the teacher is aware of personal relationships among students that may affect the group’s ability to work together, he/she should monitor the group closely, or move some of the parties involved to other groups.

3.   Always appoint a team leader for each group. The leader will assign individual tasks within the group. Select a random number for the person who will be team leader before the groups are formed.

4.   Ensure that each class member has the chance to be team leader at one point or another throughout the course. Being team leader is not a position to be reserved for only the best students in the class.

5.   Each group will select a secretary to record the group’s discussions. Only the initials of the person speaking and a note of what he/she said are needed. All students should have the opportunity to be secretary. Students who use a scribe may do so when they are secretaries.

6.   When a presentation is required, the group will select a spokesperson to present the material, but each group member must be ready to answer questions. Each class member should have the opportunity to be spokesperson.

7.   The teacher should engage in roving conferences to ensure that all groups are on topic and focused.

8.   The teacher should monitor closely groups where there appear to be difficulties. Every effort should be made to allow the team leader and group members to deal with the problems, but if need be, the teacher should arbitrate.

9.   Prior to any group activity, the teacher should review the expectations. A suggested strategy for group work:

The Nine C’s of Effective Group Work:.

·         Concentrate on the task at hand.

·         Co-operate with the teacher and teammates.

·         Collaborate on the work to be produced by sharing ideas.

·         Clarify problems by discussing the issues or asking questions.

·         Create the assigned task by amalgamating all of the information presented.

·         Conference with the teacher or another group for help with the writing process.

·         Communicate the information to your peers.

·         Complete the self/peer assessment forms as required.

·         Congratulate one another on a job well done.


Appendix 1.13

The Jigsaw Strategy

 

The Jigsaw Strategy is a co-operative learning technique whereby students work in small groups and rely on each other to learn about a particular topic. Each student becomes an “expert” on some aspect of a particular topic, and then returns to a home group to teach fellow group members what has been learned.

 

How it Works

·         The teacher divides the students into home groups.

·         The number of group members is equal to the number of workstations prepared.

·         Each group member visits a different workstation to learn and become an “expert” on the aspect of the topic at that particular workstation. Each workstation is based on a different aspect of the topic. Experts make/take notes on the information at their workstation which they take back to share with the home groups.

·         When the workstation expert group is finished and the teacher is satisfied that students are indeed experts on their topics, the students return to their home group

·         Each “expert” will share their knowledge and understanding of the aspect of the topic they have learned with the other group members, ensuring that each member of the home group fully understands the information presented. If there is a problem, the expert will ask the teacher to come to the home group to assist him/her with the presentation or to answer a specific question that may have arisen.

·         Once each group member has shared his/her “expert” information on the topic, all group members should have an essential understanding of the information presented on each of the topics found at each of the stations.

·         The activity ends with a class discussion on the topic and any follow up activities that the teacher has prepared.

 

Note: The teacher must visit each expert group and each home group to ensure information is being learned properly by the “expert” and being shared accurately with members of the home group.

 


Appendix 1.14

Group Work Checklist

 

Criteria

Never

Sometimes

Mostly

Always

Member accepts his/her task without argument.

 

 

 

 

Member undertakes task promptly.

 

 

 

 

Member follows instructions.

 

 

 

 

Member remains on task and does not distract others.

 

 

 

 

Member works collaboratively with group, sharing ideas and listening to the opinions of other group members.

 

 

 

 

Member willingly accepts the opinion of the majority when the group challenges his/her assumptions.

 

 

 

 

Member communicates effectively without raising his/her voice and interrupting others.

 

 

 

 

Member encourages others to participate by inviting comments and opinions.

 

 

 

 

Member asks for and accepts help when needed.

 

 

 

 

Member completes assigned task on time.

 

 

 

 

Member demonstrates effort and a willingness to learn.

 

 

 

 

Member demonstrates tolerance and respect for other members of the group as well as other groups.

 

 

 

 

Member listens attentively to the presentations of others in order that all group members have the same opportunity to learn.

 

 

 

 

 


Appendix 1.15

Jigsaw Group Activities Checklist

 

Expert Group

Yes

No

Some

Comment

Participant showed a willingness to learn.

 

 

 

 

Participant showed a willingness to help others learn.

 

 

 

 

Participant listened attentively to the opinions of others.

 

 

 

 

Participant offered advice and opinions on the topic.

 

 

 

 

Participant stayed on task and encouraged others to do the same.

 

 

 

 

Participant made accurate notes based on the discussion in the group.

 

 

 

 

Home Group

 

 

 

 

Participant was prepared for his teaching from the expert group. He/she demonstrated a good understanding of the topic.

 

 

 

 

Participant’s notes and information were clear and easy to follow.

 

 

 

 

Participant answered questions clearly.